A few explanations on Part 08 and William Daniels.

  I do hope those visiting are enjoying the story so far, but if you feel like something is missing, feel free to voice your opinions. While this story is practice for me, I want it to be entertaining for those who visit. Now, onto a few things about this last part and our "hero".

   This part may seem to end oddly, but there is a reason for this. The next three parts will be telling the story of this rescue from the eyes of each person involved. This is something I want to toy with for my own use to see if I can weave one large scene together from multiple views without several parts overlapping, but rather just a detail or two. I do this to push myself to be more creative with each character and interlace their actions around one another from a distance. If it sucks and enough people tell me so, no harm and no foul, I will simply rewrite a Part 09 and go from there.

  As for the character of William Daniels, I realize I have barely went into much about his physical appearance other than cold glares and detail about his "zombie self". I have done this subconsciously on purpose for one reason... I want the look of the character to be so ambiguous that any reader can potentially see themselves as William Daniels (maybe Wilma if you need the gender reversed) . This idea came to me from the old "choose your story" books of the 70's and 80's where the only word that described the primary character was "YOU". Like the last issue, if enough let me know this doesn't work I will change this in time.

   And lastly, I know there is very little feedback on this page to date. I would love to hear from the readers and potentially discuss good and bad points, so if you have a Google+ account, you can leave comments on any post (If you choose, I think you can leave them anonymous) and if you want to keep it simple and away from others eyes, you can use the e-mail this blog is attached to, with is kennethlashley@gmail.com . As I work on my book to put on sale, I would love to hear anything I am doing wrong in my writing so I can release a quality product that readers can enjoy.